Intermission, Part 2 of 2
Pages 1265-1357 (MSPA: 3165-3257)
Hold still, Slick.
Keep in mind that after this post, I’ll stop jumping around with my rewritten posts and go back to the start of Act 2. Those Act 2 posts should probably be quick and easy!
2/24/2019: I’ve been working hard on post 4 rewritten! It’s quite the doozy. Also I have now updated the page numbers to homestuck.com numbering up to post 50.
The Inaugural Death of Mister Seven is good, go read it.
I hope it gets continued at some point…
Crowbar’s alive again. And a whole bunch of other stuff is different.
You forgot this gang almost seems halfway competent when he’s running the show.
When Spades Slick makes it to a timeline where Crowbar is alive, the Midnight Crew and Felt are putting up a decent fight! The contrast between the Midnight Crew kicking the Felt’s asses and the giant gunfight with Crowbar around is super well executed. I’m glad the story took some time to flesh out Crowbar’s character when we revisit Slick and the Felt much later on; the story strongly benefits from this change.
Next up is a flash where we meet the mysterious Snowman (8).Continue reading